Shorten it…. please

Stories, long and short, are a careful collection of words to describe completely the writers thought, fears, wants, wishes, desires, needs…….. and hence will use many unique and escriptive words to convey their thought.

Business emails, however, should be brief and  relegated to ONE topic.

If your emails need this disclaimer:

NOTE: For email-friendliness, this lengthy email has been truncated. Read the full version online, with more highlights and excerpts …

Please re-write… we got bored after the first paragraph.

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